急!請英文好的幫忙翻譯信的內容 - 旅遊

給XX老師 Hi Dear Teacher/Ms XXX  => 在國外，通常稱呼老師XX小姐/太太/先生，所以這裡就看你平常怎麼叫老師很抱歉這星期四不能去上您的課I am sorry to let you know that I am not able to attend your class this Thursday. 因為要跟家裡的人去金門旅遊Because I am going on a holiday with my family to Kinmen,  所以我想請假I would like to take this day off, if it is possible.  => 我這裡加了一句，if it is possible，中文是如果可能的話，是更為有禮的說法，因為你是要“請求”老師答應讓你請假，不是“告知”老師你要請假的事實。即使大部份的老師不會太為難你，這裡的說法只是強調禮節而已。感謝您的通融Thanks for your understanding. 學生 OO 上 Kind Regards from your studentXXX, 
2006-10-06 03:39:59 補充：
It is okay to use Hi and dear at the same time.

最佳解答的第一句 hi 和dear是一起用嗎?

給XX老師
很抱歉這星期四不能去上您的課
因為要跟家裡的人去金門旅遊
所以我想請假
感謝您的通融
學生 OO 上
Dear Mr. XXX
I'm really sorry that this Thursday i'm will not be able to go to your class.
The reason is i'm going to Kinmen for a trip with my family.
I would like to take a day off.
Thank you very much for your
understanding.

Dear Mr. XX (或Ms. XX),
I am sorry that I will not be able to make it to your class this Thursday. I am going on a trip to Chin-Men with my family; thus, I would like to take a day off. Your understanding is highly appreciated.
Yours truly,
OOO

For teacher XX
Dear teacher XX,
I'm so sorry that I can't go to your class this Thursday.Because I'm going out to Chinmen with my family . So I want to ask for leave. Thanks for your accommodate.
Student OO
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Dear Sir,
I am sorry that I cannot take your class on Thursday, because I will have a trip to Kinmen with my family. Therefore, hope you to accommodate my absence.
Best regards,
XXX