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Frederica avatarFrederica · 2013-02-21

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因為是自己一句一句翻過來的~文法上可能有很大的問題~希望好心人可以幫忙修正一下^^"Hi:MynameisOOO.NicknameisOO.30yearsold.Myfavoriteissport,singsongandtravel.Thereare6peopleinmyfamily,includingmymother,mybrother,mythreesisters,andme.Theyaremarriedandenjoyinthework.WhenIamastudent,alotoftimetoreadandwrite.Incollege,gotoping-ponggroupandtoobtaingoodresultinthegam
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Daph Bay avatarDaph Bay2013-02-24
Hi,MynameisOOO.NicknameisOOOOismynickname,30yearsold.Myfavoritehobbiesisaresport,singingsongsandgoingtraveling.Thereare6peoplepersonsinmyfamily,includingmymother,myoneolderbrother,mythreeoldersisters,andmeI.Theyallarehadmarriedandenjoyinganddoingwellinthetheirworkjobs.WhenIamwasastudent,Ispentalotoftimetoreadandwrite.Incollege,gotoIhadbeenjoinedaping-ponggroupandtoobtainedagoodresult(thefourth)int
Tracy avatarTracy2013-02-25
Hi:MynameisOOO.NicknameisOO.30yearsold.Iloveplayingsport,singingandtravelling.Thereare6peopleinmyfamily:mymother,mybrother,mythreesistersandme.Theyaremarriedandhavesuccessfulcareer.WhenIwasastudent,Ispentalotoftimetoreadandwrite.Incollege,IwenttoPing-Pongclubandcamefourthinthetournament.Ialsowonthesingingcontestwithmyfriends.Ijoinedthearmywhichmademywillpowerstrong.Ialsoparticipatedinthewarsimulat