(急)幫我檢查&糾正一下這些英文~ - 旅遊

By Andrew
at 2011-09-08T00:00

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英文不太好，題目是暑假的旅遊但我根本分不清時態==請英文佳的大大幫我檢查及糾正一下感恩!Inthesummervacation,IwenttotheTaichungghosthousewithmyfriends.Aswearrivedthere,wewanttoeatsomethingbecausewearehungry.Weboughtsomcakesandhumbergers.Afterthemeal,wewentwothegohouse,buyingtheticketsbeforeenterthehouse.Unfortunately,therearesomanypeopleinthere,wehavetowaitvaey

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By Franklin
at 2011-09-10T20:03

Inthis(這個)summervacation,IwenttotheTaichungghosthousewithmyfriends.When(當)wearrivedthere,wewantedtoeatsomethingbecausewewerehungrythen(那時).Weboughtsomecakesandhumbergers.Afterthemeal,wewenttotheghosthouse,buyingtheticketsbeforeentering(before是介系詞後面+ing)thehouse.Unfortunately,thereweresomanypeoplethere,wehadtowaitforalongtime.Finally,wegottheticketsandfeltexcited.Itwasnotonlyf

(急)幫我檢查&糾正一下這些英文~ - 旅遊

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