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急急急!!!英文作文MyDream請各位幫忙修正 - 旅遊

Irma avatarIrma · 2013-06-02

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請幫忙修正文法看哪裡有錯下面有中文感謝MyDreamWhenIwasyoung,Ilikedtodraw,mydreamistobecomeafamouspainter,butmydadsaid,thepainterdiedafterbecomingfamous,soIchangedmydream.Mydreamistotraveltheworldonmyown.First,Ihopetovisittheworld-famousmuseum,speciallytheLouvreandtheBritishMuseum.Then,Iwanttoenjoymanykindsofdeliciousfoodintheworld,aswellasexperiencetheirnationalcustomsandcultures
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Oliver avatarOliver2013-06-06
WhenIwasyoung,Ilikedtodraw.mydreamwastobecomeafamouspainter.Butmydadsaidthatpaintersonlybecomefamousaftertheydie,soIchangedmydream.Mydreamistotraveltheworldonmyown.First,Ihopetovisitworld-famousmuseums,speciallytheLouvreandtheBritishMuseum.Then,Iwanttoenjoymanykindsofdeliciousfoodintheworld,aswellasexperiencetheirnationalcustomsandculturesbymyself.Moreover,Iwanttosteponalltouristattractionsinthewo
Delia avatarDelia2013-06-02
請問除了第一句還有哪裡要改嗎非常謝謝^^
Anthony avatarAnthony2013-06-06
第一句就有錯誤了喔..時態不正確後面說畫家死了之後才會有名氣但是你卻說畫家有名後才會死..還有那是你爸說的所以應該用直接引述不然就用間接引述還有他指的是很多畫家死後才有名所以要用複數而你卻用單數.....Showmore