(緊急)大學推甄英文自我介紹修改 - 旅遊

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Goodmorning,dearprofessors!Iamhonoredtohavetheopportunitytointroducemyself.Mynameis○○○,18yearsold,graduatingfrom..........Ihaveahappyfamilywithaltogetherfourmembersincludingmyparents,mysisterandme.Iamapositiveandresponsibleperson.Myhabitsarereadingbooksandtourism,bythesetwoactivitiescanimprovemyvisionandinternationaloutlook.IhavefreetimeIwillreadaboutthecommercial,economicbookstoenhancemypro

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Christine avatarChristine2012-06-19
暫修正如下,請自行再檢視修正。Goodmorning,dearprofessors!Iamhonoredtohavethethisopportunitytointroducemyselfforyou.Mynameis○○○,18yearsold,graduatedfrom..........(由何校畢業,須用過去式或過去分詞,不可用現在分詞)Ihaveahappyfamilywithaltogetherfourmembersincludingmyparents,myanolderorayoungersisterandmeI.Iamapositiveandresponsibleperson,myhabitsarereading
Aaliyah avatarAaliyah2012-06-17
哈哈要喝好喝的奶蓋綠蓋茶問我就對了└(^o^)┘小弟是逢甲大學4年級觀光系公關,最近跟靜宜大的聯誼,身材面孔都一流(誤)在活動中玩了食字路口喝到這間超好喝的自創品牌奶蓋茶而且這間只賣奶蓋喔!比甚麼常去的綠x奶蓋x好喝太太太太太太多了啦XDDDD重點是店員超正的(大誤),又是學姊,不挺一下怎麼行有
Oliver avatarOliver2012-06-18
Lame,istheonlythingIcansay,butIamstilllookingfor3otherreasonsto(ornotto)pickyou.Givethemtome,dude!2012-06-1608:08:52補充:Nay,thisdudeisdeliveringalamespeechinherentranceexam(animportantone,Isuppose).Iamaskinghertoconvinceherself,why,sheshouldpickherself,amongstthe485otherapplicants.Ofcourse,theproblemisnottheEnglish.Itislame,eveninTW....Showmore