英文作文（附中文）請幫我檢查有沒有寫錯文法，急，20點！ - 旅遊

這是要用唸的＞＜所以地名寫中文
請幫我檢查時態,介係詞......之類的文法,感謝!@@!
或是覺得可以換成哪個比較好的詞也請告訴我!
明天早上我就會選出最佳解答,請盡可能的在今天晚上給我答案好嗎?
如果沒有問題也請跟我說^^
I took a trip to 墾丁 last summer.
我去年夏天到墾丁去旅遊.
It sounds not spctial, right?
這聽起來並不特別,對八?
But, L believe that this trip to 墾丁 is one of the most special trip I have had, because I went there by a BICYCLE!
但,我相信這一趟墾丁之旅會是我所經歷過最特別的旅遊之一,因為,我是騎著腳踏車去墾丁的!
This trip took us, my father brother and me, five days.
這趟旅程花了我們....我和爸爸,弟弟......五天的時間.
On the trip, we did not stay in hotels, motels, or B&Bs.
在旅程中,我們並沒有住在旅館,汽車旅館,或是民宿.
(我不清楚民宿是不是那樣寫,也請指點一下)
We asked the staffs of elementary schools on the way for a empty classroom, sleeping on the floor with a sleeping bag.
我們向路上上小學的值班人員請求一間空教室,並且帶著睡袋睡在地板上.
In summer, the temporature is very high at twelve to three o'clock.
在夏天,中午十二點到下午三點的溫度縱是特別高.
So we often took a nap at convenient shops or 簡餐店 s which have air conditioner in.
所以我們總是在有冷氣的便利商店或簡餐店睡個午覺.
(不好意思,我查不到簡餐店怎麼拼)
It was painful to ride 118 kms a day on the trip.
在旅程中,一天之內騎完118公里是很令人痛苦的.
But when we came back to home after finishing the 400kms trip and felt extremely 有成就感, that cause nothing.
但,當我們結束了400公里的旅程回到家,並感到極度的有成就感時,那些就不算什麼了(指上一句一天騎完118公里)
(如果知道"有成就感"這個單字也請告訴我,謝謝)
這是老師今天出明天就要報告的作業
真的很需要各位幫忙
即使是一點點也好!
謝謝!