英文很急奧今晚10要 - 旅遊

去年暑假，我和同學搭火車去墾丁旅遊。
Last summer,my ciassmates and I went to Kentin to travel by train.
一到站，這裡的風和日麗，就讓我覺得身體好舒服。
When we arrived there,the weather was great,I felt my body was very nice.

我們玩了堆沙堡 還有好多水上活動
We used tee sand to made the castle and piayed many sports with water.
晚上就住在當地的民宿了
At the night,we just stayed at Kentin`s civilian house.
希望有幫到您!^^
2008-06-15 19:49:23 補充：
我們玩了堆沙堡 還有好多水上活動
是這樣才對,打錯了
We used the sand to made the castle and piayed many sports with water.
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004較優~個人看法~

My classmates and I went to Kenting by train last summer.
It was a beautiful day.
Sunshine and breeze made everyone relax and feel comfortable.
We made sand castles by seashore and had activities in the sea.
We stayed in the B&B over night.
We really had lots of fun and sweet memory.
2008-06-15 19:09:22 補充：
最後依據是我自己加的 免得好像沒有結語
2008-06-15 19:10:01 補充：
依據 錯了
是一句 電腦真笨

My classmates and I took train to Ken Ting last summer. As we got there, beautiful sunshine and sea breeze make everyone so relax and comfortable. We made sand castles on the beach and also tried few water activities. We stayed in the local B&B that night.