英文文法、語意校正 - 旅遊

Faithe avatar
By Faithe
at 2012-06-04T00:00

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英文校正，第2、3段附中文參考謝謝!Iamveryfortunatetogrowinaharmoniousfamily.Therewerefourmembersinthefamily.Myfatherisabusinessmanandmymotherisahousewife.Moreover,Ihaveasmartolderbrother,whoismybestfriendathome.Myfamilyoffersmepreciousfamilywarmth,whichmoneycan’tbuy.Myparentswouldtakeadvantageofsparetimewithwholefamilytotravelaround.Travelforme,notjustthepressuretoreleasemoreseason
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Margaret avatar
By Margaret
at 2012-06-06T10:18
Iamveryfortunatetogrowinaharmoniousfamily.Therewerefourmembersinthefamily.Myfatherisabusinessmanandmymotherisahousewife.Moreover,Ihaveasmartolderbrother,whoismybestfriendathome.Myfamilyoffersmepreciousfamilywarmth,whichmoneycan’tbuy.Myparentswouldtakeadvantageofsparetimewithwholefamilytotravelaround.Travelforme,notjustthepressuretoreleasemoreseasoninginmylife.我很幸運，成長在一個和諧
Yedda avatar
By Yedda
at 2012-06-08T00:08
你會覺得不順暢的原因可能是因為同一段裡的句子主詞不斷地換人，讓人讀起來有跳躍思考的困擾。

想要去北部四天三夜誰可以幫忙規劃一下行程

Sandy avatar
By Sandy
at 2012-06-03T00:00
想要跟男朋友去北部玩其中行程必須有九份淡水漁人碼頭跟一個遊樂園麻煩各位了

今年（2012）暑假七月到八月很讚的旅遊景點

Suhail Hany avatar
By Suhail Hany
at 2012-06-02T00:00
拜託各位大大呀~幫幫我。暑假想出國玩，除了日本.. . .幫我想想三到四人，自由行能去哪個國家.國家的哪些景 ...

9.10月義大利之旅

Caroline avatar
By Caroline
at 2012-06-02T00:00
大家好:第一次去歐洲，想請教大家幾個問題，希望大家多幫忙，謝謝!目前想參加的是東南旅行社的行程:http://www.s ...

大家覺得觀光旅遊讀哪間好呢？？？

Jake avatar
By Jake
at 2012-06-01T00:00
如題我是今年二技的畢業生要考二技成績是國文：48英文：34我本來是讀餐飲管理系，請問大家有推薦哪家學校風�� ...

領隊導遊實習

Kristin avatar
By Kristin
at 2012-06-01T00:00
我今年剛考試華語領隊及華語導遊，請問有沒有旅行社願意讓菜鳥學習？我白天有工作，可以晚上及假日到旅行社 ...