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英文高手請進~急~ - 旅遊

Ina avatarIna · 2011-12-14

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請問各問大大~我星期五要做英文報告~想請英文厲害的大大們幫幫忙想一些內容~~~我的題目是：idealjobyouwantinthefuture！我的開頭是：Inthefuture,Iwanttobeaconductor,becausetheconductorcanaroundtheworld(環遊世界)~目前只想到兩句~順便幫我看一下文法對不對！大概再幫我想個五～八句！我想說旅遊經歷可以豐富我的人生
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Ingrid avatarIngrid2011-12-14
inthefuture,iwanttobeaconductor第一句就不對了應該改成：iwanttobeatourguideinthefuture,becausetourguidescantravelaroundtheworld.*canaroundtheworld缺少了一個動詞*conductor不是導遊的意思之後可以說：Goingtodifferentplacescanenrichmylife,accumulateexperience,andsatisfymycuriousity.Also,icanlearndifferentlanguagesthroughouttripsandgainknowledge.i'vemadeupmymindthataft
Leila avatarLeila2011-12-16
idealjobyouwantinthefutureInthefuture,IwanttobeatourguidesoIcantravelaroundtheworld.Travelingtoothercountriesnotonlycangettoknowdifferentculturesbutalsoenrichmylife.Itbroadensmyvisionandperhaps,Icangettoknowfriendsfromdifferentcountriesaroundtheworld.Beingatourguide,Iwillgainmoreconfidencebytalkingtopeopleandalsotrainmyselfabettercommunicationskill.Inthefuture,Iwillbeabletotakemyfamilytotravelarou