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我們還沒決定詳細的旅遊行程.Wehavenotdecidedthedetailsofthetraveltrip.但是,我們會買JRPass全日本7日卷,我們想去奈良和你的家鄉.but,IwillbuyJRJapanrailpass7-day,Iwantto奈良andyourhometown.不用送任何禮物Donotsendanygifts.如果林小姐收到你的賀卡,她就會很開心.^^IfLinさんreceivedyourcardwillbeveryhappy.^^謝謝你~Thankyou~

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David avatarDavid2012-09-21
我們還沒決定詳細的旅遊行程.Wehavenotdecidedthedetailsofthe(travel)itinerary.但是,我們會買JRPass全日本7日卷,我們想去奈良和你的家鄉.However,Iwillbuythe7-daypassforJR(JapanRail),Iwantto(wouldliketo)visit奈良andyourhometown.Using"wantto"istoodirect,"wouldliketo"wouldbemorepolite.不用送任何禮物Donotsendanygifts!如果林小姐收到你的賀
Isabella avatarIsabella2012-09-19
我們還沒決定詳細的旅遊行程.Wehavenotdecidedthedetailsofplanforourtripyet.但是,我們會買JRPass全日本7日卷,我們想去奈良和你的家鄉.but,wewillbuythe7-dayJRJapanrailpass,wewishtovisit奈良andyourhometown.不用送任何禮物Donotsendanygift.如果林小姐收到你的賀卡,她就會很開心.^^IfLinさんreceivesyourcard,shewillbeveryhappy.^^謝謝你~Thankyou~.