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請高手指教:一百二十字的文章,敘述你難忘的旅遊經驗 - 旅遊

Donna avatarDonna · 2012-09-19

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>>寫一篇約一百二十字(8至12個句子)的文章,敘述你難忘的旅遊經驗.自己寫了一篇作文,希望有高手可以幫忙指正,或在某些段落提供合適的用語,感謝!WhenIwasacollegestudent,myclassmateinvitedmetotakethenewyearvacationforanoverseatourtogetherwithhim.It'sthefirsttimeformetogoabroad,ourdestinationwasGuam,it'sa3hoursflightfromTaiwantothere.Andm
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Faithe avatarFaithe2012-09-23
WhenIwasacollegestudent,myclassmateinvitedmetotakeatripabroadduringnewyearvacation.It'sthemyfirsttimetogoabroad.Andittookus3hoursfromTaiwantoourdestination:Guam.ItwassoconvenientthatVisawasnotrequiredforthetouristsfromTaiwan.TheweatherinTaiwanwascoldandwetduringthenewyear;howeveritwasgorgeousinGuam.Thereisabeautifulbeachbesidethehotelwestayed.Wecouldevenseefishswimmingaround.What'smore,the