我英檢複試日期快到了(初級),我開始在練習英文短文...
可是我的文法一直很差...
我希望各位可以幫我檢查一下...
如果可以的話,告訴我錯在哪...該怎麼訂正...
麻煩你們了!!!>0<
下面就是我自己練習的兩篇短文!!(50 字左右)
英文 1:
Last year summer vacation, I and my classmate have planed a travel schedule for vacation.
Then we first take the train to Kenting, arrive after Kenting, we rent a car the beach to play the water sport , we have fun until too tired to play anything.
At night, we live in bed-and-breakfast.
中文 2:
去年暑假,我和同學計畫了一個旅遊行程。
我們先搭火車到墾丁,到達墾丁後,我們租了一台車到海灘玩水上活動,我們玩的很愉快,直到太累而不能在玩任何遊戲。
晚上,我們就住進民宿休息。
英文 2:
Whenever on weekend, I have to go to a night market with my friend.
We go to eat first fried rice noodles matches the pig blood soup every time, we bought the pearl milk tea to drink in addition, and then we bought the tomatoes on sweet to eat, when we feel stuffed, we come home.
中文 2:
每個週末,我都會和我朋友去夜市,我們都一定先吃炒米粉配豬血湯,接著再買珍珠奶茶來喝,然後再去買糖葫蘆來吃,最後吃到很撐,我們才回家。
Update:
To 小寂寞
看文章方面我都還可以...
我英文的聽.說.讀.寫 就是差在寫...
單一句子...我文法還可以
可是要變成一篇的時候...
我就會不知道主.受詞應該怎麼放...
我們老師有讓我們練習過...
可是他都沒有批改給我們...
所以我一直不知道我的文法應該怎麼訂正...
To 聽說愛情回來過
這兩篇短文我是用課本的練習題
在食物的表達上....
都是那時候教的單字...
如果要改的話...
我應該改成什麼比較好
可是我的文法一直很差...
我希望各位可以幫我檢查一下...
如果可以的話,告訴我錯在哪...該怎麼訂正...
麻煩你們了!!!>0<
下面就是我自己練習的兩篇短文!!(50 字左右)
英文 1:
Last year summer vacation, I and my classmate have planed a travel schedule for vacation.
Then we first take the train to Kenting, arrive after Kenting, we rent a car the beach to play the water sport , we have fun until too tired to play anything.
At night, we live in bed-and-breakfast.
中文 2:
去年暑假,我和同學計畫了一個旅遊行程。
我們先搭火車到墾丁,到達墾丁後,我們租了一台車到海灘玩水上活動,我們玩的很愉快,直到太累而不能在玩任何遊戲。
晚上,我們就住進民宿休息。
英文 2:
Whenever on weekend, I have to go to a night market with my friend.
We go to eat first fried rice noodles matches the pig blood soup every time, we bought the pearl milk tea to drink in addition, and then we bought the tomatoes on sweet to eat, when we feel stuffed, we come home.
中文 2:
每個週末,我都會和我朋友去夜市,我們都一定先吃炒米粉配豬血湯,接著再買珍珠奶茶來喝,然後再去買糖葫蘆來吃,最後吃到很撐,我們才回家。
Update:
To 小寂寞
看文章方面我都還可以...
我英文的聽.說.讀.寫 就是差在寫...
單一句子...我文法還可以
可是要變成一篇的時候...
我就會不知道主.受詞應該怎麼放...
我們老師有讓我們練習過...
可是他都沒有批改給我們...
所以我一直不知道我的文法應該怎麼訂正...
To 聽說愛情回來過
這兩篇短文我是用課本的練習題
在食物的表達上....
都是那時候教的單字...
如果要改的話...
我應該改成什麼比較好
All Comments
We took the train to Kenting and rented a car at Kenting. We drove to the beach and had a lot of fun with the water activities. We had so muchfun and we were too tired to play any other games.
At night, we stayed at a B&B for over night.
Every weekend, I will hang out with my friends at the night market.
We always start with fried rice noodles and pig blood soup then we will
have pearl milk tea and icing tomatoes on stick for dessert. We only leave the market when everyone's really really full.
你的文法有很多問題呢...
um... 我認為你應該多看一些簡單的英文文章..
可以是故事書或是簡單的報章雜誌都可以...
把基礎打好
故事書你可以學到基礎...
還有.. 我們都是謙虛的人..所以要把I 放在後面
____和我
my friends and I
Mary and I
不能寫 I and Mary
2008-09-17 19:30:15 補充：
這就是為什麼你需要多看一點英文的文章唷
或是故事書都好..
因為從裡面你會學到基本的句型
多看真的會很有幫助的...
最好不要找課本看.. 因為有時候內容很無聊你也沒辦法吸收..
所以你可以上網去一些做給小朋友的英文網站...
或是找你喜歡的英文內容來讀
We went to Kenting by train.When we arrive Kenting, we rent a car and went to beach by it. We played the water sports and had fun until we were too tired to play anything.
At night, we rest in bed-and-breakfast (boarding-house).
Every weekend, I always went to a night market with my friend.
We must eat stir-fry rice noodles with the pig blood soup every time, and then we bought the pearl milk tea and the tomatoes with syrup on it.
We went home when we stuffed.
有點小建議
你第二篇文章用了很多台灣的小吃
這些東西比較難表達
也許可以換一些比較好表達的食物
應該會比較容易表示