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不是很了解你的意思...不過我試著幫你改寫看看好了ThetriptoThailandwasmyfirsttripabroad.Iwenttherewithmymomandfeltsoexcited.第一段注意時態以及feel接過去分詞的用法ThetemplesinThailandareallsospecialthattheyhavemanythornsontheroofandlookveryshiny.第二段則是different是adj.你須要一個動詞因為描述的是一個常態性的事實所以我用現在式Wewe

ThiswasmyfirsttimethatIwentabroad,Iwasveryexcited.Especiallymymomwentwithme.ThetemplesinThailandaredifferentfromoursinTaiwan.Theyarenotonlycolorfulbutalsohavealotofshapes.theroofsareelaboratlymade,prettyandshiny.Wesawanelephantshow,itwasawesome.Thoseelephantswereamazing,theybowed,rodebikes,playedbasketballandbaseballevengavemassages.Aftertheshowwehadanelephantbackride,theywiggledtheirearslikefanss

Thisismyfirstexperiencetogoabroad,whichIfeltsoexhilaratedandflushed.Plus,Iwentthere,Thailand,withmymotheraccompanied.ThailandisacountryinSoutheastAsia.ToitseastlieLaosandCambodia;toitssouth,theGulfofThailandandMalaysia;andtoitswest,theAndamanSeaandBurma.ItscapitalandlargestcityisBangkok,withThainameKrungThep.TheThailanguageisThailand'snationallanguage,writteninitsownalphabet.ThetraditionalThai

Thisisthefirsttimevisitinganothercountrywithmymother.Iwasreallyexcitedaboutthetrip.Thailandisaveryspecialplace,especiallyit'stemples.Whatmakesitdifferentfromoursisthesharpandshiningobjectsontherooftop.Wewatchedashowwhereelephantperformtheiruniquetalents,includingbow,draw,rideabike,playbasketball,playfootball,andmassage.Thenwewereluckyenoughtobeabletorideontheelephant.Theywalkedslowlywiththeire