請幫忙修改英文作文!題目：旅遊 - 旅遊
By James
at 2008-07-25T00:00
這是一篇英文作文題目是TriptoThailand我個人能力不佳.... 錯誤應該很多..也不太通暢希望有大可以幫我訂正修改文法上的錯誤可以多加一點句子...讓他通暢一點先感謝大大的幫忙!!內文： ThisisthefirsttimeIwentabroad.Ifeltsoexciting,andIwenttherewithmymother. Thailand’stempleisspecial,itdifferentwithourtemple.Itsspecialfeatureis
不是很了解你的意思...不過我試著幫你改寫看看好了ThetriptoThailandwasmyfirsttripabroad.Iwenttherewithmymomandfeltsoexcited.第一段注意時態以及feel接過去分詞的用法ThetemplesinThailandareallsospecialthattheyhavemanythornsontheroofandlookveryshiny.第二段則是different是adj.你須要一個動詞因為描述的是一個常態性的事實所以我用現在式Wewe
ThiswasmyfirsttimethatIwentabroad,Iwasveryexcited.Especiallymymomwentwithme.ThetemplesinThailandaredifferentfromoursinTaiwan.Theyarenotonlycolorfulbutalsohavealotofshapes.theroofsareelaboratlymade,prettyandshiny.Wesawanelephantshow,itwasawesome.Thoseelephantswereamazing,theybowed,rodebikes,playedbasketballandbaseballevengavemassages.Aftertheshowwehadanelephantbackride,theywiggledtheirearslikefanss
Thisismyfirstexperiencetogoabroad,whichIfeltsoexhilaratedandflushed.Plus,Iwentthere,Thailand,withmymotheraccompanied.ThailandisacountryinSoutheastAsia.ToitseastlieLaosandCambodia;toitssouth,theGulfofThailandandMalaysia;andtoitswest,theAndamanSeaandBurma.ItscapitalandlargestcityisBangkok,withThainameKrungThep.TheThailanguageisThailand'snationallanguage,writteninitsownalphabet.ThetraditionalThai
Thisisthefirsttimevisitinganothercountrywithmymother.Iwasreallyexcitedaboutthetrip.Thailandisaveryspecialplace,especiallyit'stemples.Whatmakesitdifferentfromoursisthesharpandshiningobjectsontherooftop.Wewatchedashowwhereelephantperformtheiruniquetalents,includingbow,draw,rideabike,playbasketball,playfootball,andmassage.Thenwewereluckyenoughtobeabletorideontheelephant.Theywalkedslowlywiththeire
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