請幫忙修飾一下英文!!20點贈送 - 旅遊

我曾經橫跨亞非歐三洲自助旅行 , 完成了近程的夢想 。
分別走訪了約旦、埃及、冰島 ,
也利用轉機之便在哥本哈根、斯德哥爾摩和北京停留二至三日 ,
不僅增廣見聞 , 也體驗了當地的人文風情 !
雖然知道外地出差與旅遊不能相提並論 ,
但若能藉由工作看見世界的美 , 就算是匆匆一瞥 , 也心滿意足
I have traveled around Asia , Africa and Europe , accomplished the near future goal.
I have been to Jordan , Egypt and Iceland.
And stayed couple days in Copenhagen , Stockholm and Beijing through
stopping over.
I widen my sight and experienced the local livings.
I know it is completely different between biz trip and traveling.
but if i cud see how wonderful the world is , it would be great and satified
even just a short stay .