請英文大大--幫我看看英文文法~ - 旅遊

1.What is something you really want to learn before you die? Why?
Ans: I hope to master fluently English, and then the Guided Tour gets to
the whole world.
(我希望可以學會流利的英文然後可以到世界各地自助旅行)
=> master 己經有精通的意思，可以不用加副詞 fluently 來修飾；另外 and then 後面的子句怪怪的，建議修改如下：
I hope to master English, and then I could backpack around the world.
2.Who is your favorite famous person? Why?
Ans: I the favorite person be Chiang, Jin-kuo, really a lot of because of his contribution to Taiwan.
(我最喜愛的名人是蔣經國,因為他對台灣的貢献真的很多)
=> 這句話的文法不正確，建議修改如下：
Chiang, Jin-kuo is my (most) favorite person because his contribution to Taiwan was significant and beneficial.
3.Where do you think you will be five years from now?
Ans: I think the possibility didn't change too greatly, dissimilarity of is me may have already given birth to a kid to be a mother.
(我覺得五年以後可能沒有太大改變,不同的是我可能已經生了小孩當媽媽了)
=> 這句話的文法及時態不正確，建議修改如下：
I think there are merely few changes for the next five years, and the one of them is that I am probably to be a mother.
4.How would your life be changed if there was no TV?
Ans: If in my life was no TV I will feel that the life has no center of gravity.
Ha ha~ In fact if have no television, I believe is can increase family of interaction
(如果生活裡沒有電視,我會覺得我生活沒有重心,哈哈,其實如果沒有電視,我相信是可以增加家人間的互動)
=> 這句話的文法不正確，建議修改如下：
Ha~ It's an interesting question for me. If there were no TV in our lives, I could lose the focus of my life. Yet, I believe that the interaction between family members could increase under the situation.
5.Should university students have part-time jobs? Why?
Ans: I approve of the part-time job of university student very much, because I feel and know a profitable pain, just know to cherish.
(我非常贊同大學生打工, 因為我覺得要知道賺錢的辛苦,才懂得珍惜)
=> 這句話的文法不正確，建議修改如下：
I approve of the issue that university students should have part-time jobs. That is because they can only learn how to cherish everything by earning money hardily.
2008-05-05 10:52:51 補充：
表示贊成的 approve of，可以更換成比較常聽到的 agree with喔！

1. I hope that I can master English first, speak fluently, and then take an individual
travel around the world.
(我希望可以學會流利的英文然後可以到世界各地自助旅行)
2. My favorite famous person is Chiang, Jin-Kuo, because he made a lot of
contribution to Taiwan.
(我最喜愛的名人是蔣經國,因為他對台灣的貢献真的很多)
3. I think that maybe I will not change too much five years form now. The only
difference is that I could become a mother and have children.
(我覺得五年以後可能沒有太大改變,不同的是我可能已經生了小孩當媽媽了)
4. If there was no TV in my life, I will lose the focuse of my life. Ha ha~
In fact, if without TV in my life, I believe that it will increase the interaction between
my family.
(如果生活裡沒有電視,我會覺得我生活沒有重心,哈哈,其實如果沒有電視,我相信是可以增加家人間的互動)
5. I agree it very much, because I think that they will know how hard when working
and know to cherish everything.
(我非常贊同大學生打工, 因為我覺得他們才知道賺錢的辛苦,才懂得珍惜)
希望有幫到你喔！
2008-05-04 17:17:28 補充：
4. If there was no TV in my life, I will lose the focus of my life. Ha ha~
In fact, if without TV in my life, I believe that it will increase the interaction between my families.
這是修改後的喔！