請英文高手幫我訂正文法用字 - 旅遊

我有壹個難忘旅遊經驗在高雄跟墾丁跟我的寵物 我養兩隻寵物都是貴賓狗
I have an unforgettable travel in Kaohsiung and Kenting with my pets. I raise two dogs they are poodles.
我從來不帶他們出遠門
I never get a long journey with two pets.
在我想象中他們一定是會失控
I think they will be uncontrolled in my mind.
但是這次不一樣 我鼓起勇氣帶他們到墾丁高雄
But this time is different. I have to gather the courage to bring two pets to go to outdoor.
第一天非常開心的搭上火車
first day they are very happy by train.
我非常害怕他們會因為路途遙遠在車上亂叫吵到別人
But I am very scared of they will be bark loudly to bother others.
相反的他們很乖的一直到了高雄
on the contrary they are very well-behaved.
我們先到了墾丁 放下行李往海灘去了
then we are arrived in Kenting and check in the guesthouse.
我們去的時間剛好是台風過後 不知道浪如此之大
the moment is after typhoon
從來沒出過遠門的他們 看到海水興奮地衝過去
They never go to beach before so they are very exciting and rush in the ocean.
幸好同行的有人把他們抓了回來 因為他們差點被海浪捲走，
Fortunately my boyfriend catch then away. They almost to drown in the ocean. And to leave me away forever.
他們非常的害怕 但是一下就忘記了
Although they are very afraid of that , they are forget that soon
下面我不會了......
他們兩在沙灘上玩得非常的開心，回到民訴我們開始洗狗，
洗狗真是一大困難的任務，因為他們在海邊玩得太開心 所以眼睛裡面都是沙。